It is an undeniable fact that the human
species is currently suffering from the rapidly worsening environment. This
average temperature of this planet is elevating very fast, leading to the rise
in the sea level, endangering the lives of countless people. Species of animal
and plant are being extinct right at this moment. Because of the gravity of the
current situation, the human being has started to realize the importance of preserving
the environment. Therefore, the 21st century is the time that we
should focus on preventing the environment from being collapsed through means
of government policy and preservation technology, and the change of the society.
To start with, government policies are expected
to stop or at least slow down the global warming, as they serve as an effective
way to change people’s behavior. Countless research results suggest that in
order to protect the environment, we should change our lifestyle to reduce the
amount of carbon dioxide and food garbage emitted. However, even though many
people know the gravity of the current environmental issue, they do not truly know
how they should change their lifestyle to achieve that goal. This is why
government policy is important, as it guides people to change their behavior efficiently
by setting a standard that people should follow. Government policies which are
now being made will therefore serve as a great way to slow down the global
warming.
Additionally, many countries are now
putting great effort to develop technologies that help save the environment. One
example is the development of alternative energy sources, which is significant
as they greatly reduce the amount of carbon dioxide emitted by the use of
energy. Other technologies like CCS(Carbon Capture and Storage), which is being
developed to prevent carbon dioxide from being emitted into the atmosphere by
storing them deep inside the sea, are also being developed. Furthermore, city
systems and construction technology is now changing into a more eco-friendly
way. As the majority of the energy spent by the human civilization is used by
buildings and city systems, this is a major change that would help our
civilization itself to be more eco-friendly. These technologies are still being
developed and are expected to reach a level where they can be adapted to our
daily lives by a few decades.
Lastly, the society itself is changing,
which is a very hopeful phenomenon. The 20th century was the ‘age of
progress’, where we could not care about the environment, as we were so busy
trying to feed ourselves. However, the society is starting to change, and
people are now cognizant of the fact that the 21st century should be
‘the age of preservation’. This is because the society is now more mature, as
the advance of technology has freed many people from the dearth of basic
supplies. Countless people are now advocating the importance of protecting the environment
rather than to focus on economic growth, and some of them started to change
their way of living to be a help to this planet. The society itself is now
starting to be eco-friendly, which will gradually lead to a positive change in
the environment.
The new century has started with a
collapsing environment. However, we, the human species, still have hope of
saving the planet and ourselves, and have started to seek for ways to bring
that hope into reality. Hopefully, 21st century will act as a new
start for the human species, a start of the ‘era of harmony’ when human species
can develop itself and preserve the environment efficiently at the same time.
very good choice of topic. climate change is a very big problem and I believe this essay has good content overall. I believe that the collapse of environment will happen in 21st century, I really do. But there is no proof in the essay I guess. nice essay :)
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ReplyDeleteWell written essay, and nice chose of vocabularies. However, I am worried about your choice of topic. Environmental problems that are occurring modern society is too many time overused topic. So, though you wrote your essay really nice and neat, the topic is not interesting enough to obtain attention from public. Nice try, but next time when you choose the topic, invest just a little more time finding more attractive one.
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